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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Ah, so many things going on in this chapter; it's so exciting!

I'm very happy to finally see the characters flourish and interact, and to get to know what they're like in your head. Characterisation-wise, you've done marvellously this chapter. It was quite nice to see that George's sense of humour is still intact. It started with gratitude, but then ended in teasing. And now that the ring is named after her and it's attracting clientele, he owes her a lot more.

You've got Hermione written perfectly as well. Her temper and her curiosity and her defensiveness. It's all there.

I really enjoyed your focus on Harry and Hermione's friendship in this chapter. I think you're doing a great job portraying it. It's good that Harry is looking out for her and making sure she's taking breaks. Also the scene when they're at DD and he immediately decides that the lantern is the perfect gift for her really goes to show how well he knows her. I also would really love one of those for myself because I have a tendency to read in the balcony at night where there is no lamp.

I must say that Iím always hesitant when I approach Hogwarts Era stories, especially when the trio is prominent because I worry about characterisation. But yours, not only is it sitting with me well, it's impressing me. I can't applaud you enough!

The plot so far is great too. I'm wondering how long things will stay civil between George and the 'proprietor' or if things are going to spiral out of control soon. Is ĎNever been one for chess, myself. But the quaffle is in your possession, Red.í supposed to be a clue for us? Because a few names come to mind, but I'm going to keep them myself for now because I don't like to be proven wrong! :P

Anyway, this has been another incredibly enjoyable chapter. Possibly the best so far due to how there's a lot more going on in it and how much more we get to see of the characters.

I've only got one chapter ahead of me and that concerns me. Please, do keep on writing this and I hope you can update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try to keep them as close to the original characters our wonderful JK produced. As for the chess thing, it could be seen as a clue, but it's also because I don't know a darn thing about the game besides how to move a pawn :/

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