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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Hello, I'm still around for more creative fun. I'm sitting here wondering how you'll come up with all the fancy products that will be used on both sides of this challenge. I also just came to the realisation that this challenge is a bit of a present to George, just in case he was thinking of slackening because of his grief or because Fred isn't there anymore. This should keep him trying be innovative and coming up with great products. So the 'proprietor', in my opinion, is really doing George a favor. But this story is only getting started, so I may be completely wrong.

I quite like how you explain where George gets his inspiration. Whether it's Hermione or just things he comes upon when he's out and about. It really does make things realistic and more interesting to me. It'll be fun to take a walk around George's brain when it's written this way.

Oh, and in the display description, you've got a D missing in 'powder'.
"Each Piece Carefully Infused With Darkness Power".

It, indeed, is a short chapter and all, which is why I don't have anything else to say about this chapter. But all in all, it was fun and officially kicks off this game, I suppose. I'm still very hooked and enjoying the story! :)


Author's Response: I literally sat down and wrote an entire list of products the proprietor would come up with and ones that George would as well and how they would play off each other. And thats how I set my chapters up...It was actually hard to come up with original ideas and not useanthng they created in the books, or tweak them.

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