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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Hello! I was going to through the recently published stories and this caught my eyes! And I'm very glad it did.

It's quite nice how you've taken inspiration from Alice in Wonderland and brought it into the magical world. It makes sense that someone would try to come up with spells and potions that would replicate fictional things, especially if they're a muggleborn. But you haven't told us anything about who the owner is, but I'm very intrigued to know who it is and what their intentions are.

Which brings me to my next point: ambiguity. You've kept things very nice and short but definitely gave me enough to get me hooked. Throughout the chapter there has been this eerie feel that I thought really suits the story so far. It's reinforced by the great, graceful descriptions. They were meticulous but not overwhelming; just the right amount to give us a feel of the place and the atmosphere. And I felt as though you really did take me there and I could see the place well enough in my head.

When I came to the end of the chapter, that's especially when I went, 'whoa, this story definitely has a lot of potential'. It reminded me a bit of the Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern, which I really love. And if this story is anything like that at all, then I'll probably enjoy it as well. I'm looking forward to the rest of the chapters and seeing how you'll develop the plot and the characters, but really well done on this one.

-Manno

Author's Response: Holy cow! I sat here and read through all your reviews in one sitting! First, I just want to say thank you for taking the time to do so! And for reminding me to go back and edit a few things! I read the Night Circus, and it has to be one of my favorite books, I loved how she was able to create such beauty with her descriptions and that's kind of what I'm going for here. Thank you for reading!

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