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Review:Frankie05 says:
This is so cute! I loved it. I am all about this fluff right now and this is perfection. You so tangibly captured the innocence of childhood. I can picture a five year terrified of the pain he thinks will be coming. This makes me want children, it's so magnificent. I love the innocent of not using magic but Ginny so gently talks him down from his fear and the magic that is positive :)
In comes Harry!! Hey Harry- you definitely run towards danger when it comes to those you love. His kindness is so evident here and I love it. I miss Harry- I think he is forgotten about in a world that was set up because of him!
I love what you said here, "But when I'm afraid, I run and hide." James said clearly not understanding why being afraid made Harry runs towards the source of the noise." This sentence was a gold mine and is such a perfect description of Harry. Of course there is respect in Ginny's voice when she tells her son of his heroics. This was so good. :)

Frankie

Author's Response: Frankie! Thank you SO much for stopping by and leaving this amazing review!

Awww, thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so flattered! I'm happy that you think I captured the childhood innocence well! And YAY for making you want children! :D

Haha, yes! Harry always has, and always will, run towards danger. Awww! Yes, I completely agree that he can be forgotten about sometimes, and it's sad!

Awww, I'm so happy you liked that sentence so much, and that you think it's a perfect description of Harry!

Thank you SO MUCH for this amazing review!!


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