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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello! I'm here for our review swap!
I thought this story was so fun. I just loved Draco's voice here! I thought you did a really nice job showing how his character turned around after the war, and how he really wasn't an evil person, he was just put in a really hard position.
I could really hear his disbelief coming through when he talked about being poor. Haha.
I really liked the way you described Draco's mother. I always felt really bad for both Draco and Narcissa in the books, because I think they're both just doing what they have to to survive. And then they make it through the war and they lose everything... It makes sense that Narcissa would be depressed after that.
I really liked the way you had Draco change somewhat gradually. He didn't become this great person the second the war ended. He still thought Muggles were beneath him when he went to America, but he got a Muggle job because he had no other choice. I liked that he changed after being forced out of his comfort zone, and that it was something that happened over time.
I thought the end of this was really sweet. I felt so bad that Draco had to be alone on Christmas, so I like that his coworkers reached out to him, and that he got a card from his mother.
This was a really nice one-shot! Thanks for the swap!
Cassie :)

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