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Review:C says:
I'm sorry, I can't continue to read this story due to how much I hate the point of view character, I understand that you are trying to have her come across of what she was taught her whole life- but she has absolutely no likeable traits. She is annoying and shallow around Rosier and generally a biatch otherwise. It's a shame, you seem like a good writer. At last, don't let me discourage you, I just thought I'd tell you that you OCs might loose you readers, especially when written in 1st Person.

Author's Response: Hey don't feel bad! Haha. I getcha. I generally struggle with writing Claire often because I wanted her perspective to be new. Often in this era of writing people take two approaches to someone on the side of Voldemort either they are inherently evil and we, as the reader, discover why they end up like that or what lead to them being that way or they have a change of heart. I wanted a different approach with Claire. I wanted indifference and indecisiveness on where she truly stands. About half way through these chapters I wanted to switch to 3rd but felt I had gone far too deep in writing. But seriously, this is a great review. I enjoyed your honesty! Thank you!

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