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Review:AdinaPuff says:
Can I just start by saying that the last line was so powerful.

It wrapped up the entire one shot in five short words. In fact, it wrapped up the entire character of Draco Malfoy in five short words. I absolutely loved it. I could just sit here and reread that sentence over and ove again. It has so much power and feels. I can't even get over it.

This entire one shot has every feels in the book. I'm a sucker for an angst, sad, dark story. And this had so much. I love how happy Harry is, and how it makes Draco feel. And yet Draco knows they can't keep being together. That fate has already intervened. They weren't meant to be together in any form whatsoever. It just wasn't meant to be. And you captured that so well.

I don't usually read AU but I'm sure glad I did. What inspired you to write something like this? Most Drarrys are set in Post Hogwarts just because it's easier (or to me it is anyway) to write.

I loved this so much! You did a fantastic job capturing the emotions in Draco. I just loved this so much.

- Leigh xxx

Author's Response: Wow, I didn't even realize how powerful that last line was until you said it. But I did want it to stand out and, as you said, basically describe Draco. He knows his fate, and he knows he can't change it. But he knows Harry will continue fighting to save the Wizarding World no matter what.

I'm glad this story has a lot of feels. Would you believe me if I told you that I was mentally numb while writing it? I honestly didn't know if it captured the sadness and defeat I was trying to portray. But apparently it did and everything worked out well.

I'm not sure exactly what inspired me to write this. I've been meaning to write a Drarry for quite some time now, I originally had a much longer version planned, but then got stuck and decided to just cut straight to the break up part. Which surprisingly worked out rather well. Even though I do intend to write a prequel and maybe a couple of sequels. I like the idea of this pairing. I think it's always been a possibility. Harry spent his sixth year practically stalking Draco, and Draco has spent most of his time at Hogwarts wanting to one-up Harry after he refused to be his friend. I think part of the reason it was so hard for me to write this is because it is set during Hogwarts time, so you have to meddle with the canon quite a bit which is very daunting. Fall Out Boy definitely helped inspire this one-shot as well, I love them and their music and after hearing this song, and those particular lines, enough times something clicked in my brain and thought "Hey this kind of sums of Draco/Harry" and I've been wanting to write it ever since.


Thank you so much for this lovely review! I'm glad you decided to read this because I've been wanting more feedback on it, so thank you again for this review. I'm so glad you loved the story.


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