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Review:Laura says:
Great chapter. Poor Seth is being targeted because of James. James has some feeling for her, it is obvious. The question is: can he handle it? And his acting so weird at the end of the chapter - very interesting twist in the plot. Seth wants to be cool about it, but she is definitely bothered. I do not blame her. She might not forgive this easily (woman's wounded pride xD). I like how her character is developed, she is a strong person, even if she does not realize this. I absolutely adore the trio of friends - Sam, Katie and Seth are great together. Vala seems to care about her cousin. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hey Laura! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a sweet review :) I'm so glad you enjoy the story and how everything is turning out. James is definitely acting weird but it might be a while until we find out why. And I'm glad that you noticed Seth's development - I really try to have her act differently in situations and show that she really is strong, no matter what she thinks :).

I love Katie, Seth and Sam too, they work well together.. and Vala, she definitely tries to do the right thing ;)

Thanks so much for reading and always coming back to this story. I can't tell you how much that means to me! And, update is ready for the upload :)

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