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Review:Xray says:
Welcome to the family James. I have finally reached the point I dreaded. I have read the last chapter posted. I returned to HP Fanfiction less then a week ago, as I had been away for over two years. I left because, although I am a huge HP fan, some of the best stories were abandoned and you were left hanging. One of my favorites, Hogwart's Sanitarium, that was at one time the most popular story on the site, was left to rot. No word by the author, she just disappeared. I was so disappointed. I was her favorite reviewer and she even referenced my reviews at the beginning of her new chapters. I felt so let down when she stopped writing. I just hope she is alright. But back to your story. This story caught my attention and I have read the entire works in two days. I believe you are a very skilled writer and have caught JK's inspiration and have filled a hole in the story left in her books.

I have a few suggestions if I may be so bold:
I know you are trying to stay true to JK's vision, but a little Potter / Dursley interaction would be fun to read.
JK never really brought up any reference to Harry's parents relatives (other than Lily's Sister). Maybe some background on them (ie. Grandparents, cousins, etc). A good starting point could be Hogwarts old school records. Just a thought.
And a little negative feedback (sorry).spell check. Every now and then some spelling errors, but again, very few.
I look forward to the following chapters and send you all my confidence in continuing this great story.
Ever forward.your friend.Xray.

Author's Response: I totally understand your frustration about people suddenly giving up on their stories. I can promise you though that I have no intention of doing that. Should I ever feel I can't complete all 19 years of this story (which I really don't think I will, but let's just play with the thought here) I will at least give this story an ending. I have put way too much work into it to suddenly stop it.

I am so, so happy that you have enjoyed this story so far! It really means a lot - and as for the Dursley's, they're not as far away as you may think. And I'll definitely make sure to look out for spelling errors :) THank you for telling me that.

I'll keep my fingers crossed that you will continue to enjoy the story. Thank you so, so much for all your kind words, they really mean a lot to me xxx


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