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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Hufflepuff- House cup 2015!

Hey there, figured I'd come and read you're next chapter seeing as the first one was so good.

So first off I think you've did it again with the characterisations, especially the panic that set in when Harry thought Albus had gone missing. I can relate to that bit, and boy is it scary! I think you got that across really well.

Loved James' attitude in this, nice surly teenager aha. I can see why he'd get all annoyed though although I loved the line "James Sirius, don't let me hear you say that again" because it sounds like something you'd say to someone younger but since the line Ginny's replying too could also sound like a child, I think it fits really well.

(Side note, but I love that you put Al in Slytherin, I always imagined he could potentially end up in there after asking his father about it in DH!)

Anyway, this was another great chapter, i think you write the potter family really well and this comes across as being another funny, well-written chapter! :)

Author's Response: EEEK! Another amazing review?! Thank you!!

I'm so happy that you still think the characterization is good, and that I conveyed the emotions well!

Haha yes, James isn't the little boy crying anymore! :P Yes, it's kind of easy to understand why he'd be annoyed, but luckily Ginny was there to put him in his place! :P I'm happy that you think that line fits really well!

As for Al - I have always read different stories where Al was in Gryffindor or Slytherin, and I really wasn't sure which side of that debate I was on, until I wrote this. I just thought it made for a little more dynamics and diversity amongst the Potters house-wise, and especially after the conversation you mentioned in DH! :D I'm glad you liked it!!

Thank you SO much for another fabulous review! I have 2 more chapters planned, I'm hoping to have them up soon!


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