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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Hufflepuff, House Cup 2015!

Haha, wow, this was great. I loved your characterisation of James, covering their knee and not understanding why Harry had ran towards him all seemed typical of something that a child would do!

This was both adorable and funny, I think you've got a nice mix going on there and managed to find a really good balance. I especially love the part with Harry, this is definitely something that I can see him doing because you know he's going to be really protective over his kids. I also love the part were you wrote Ginny "fought to keep a huge smile from spreading across her face". Aha, I could really imagine that happening.

Overall I think you've wrote a really great fic, with great characterisation, especially since it's so short because sometimes it can be hard to get into the story quickly but I think you managed that really well. Great job! :)

Author's Response: Shazaa!! Hello! Thank you So much for stopping by and leaving this amazing review!

Awww, thank you so much for your kind words! I'm thrilled that you liked James' characterization and found it to be very realistically child-like! :D

I was definitely going for funny and adorable here, in fact this was my first attempt at anything similar to humor, so I'm happy that you found it to be funny!! Yes, I agree Harry would be overprotective of his kids, which was pretty much the entire inspiration for this little collection of stories! And haha, yes, I'm pretty sure Ginny would be laughing a LOT at Harry! :P

Thank you SO much for your compliments! I'm so flattered!!


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