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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Here for the House Cup 2015 - Gryffindor!


In 800 words you had me smiling. This was so cute. I have a niece, she's three, and she's very dramatic about everything and also very clumsy. She gets hurt all the time and if she has a band aid on she'll point to her scrape or whatever she did to herself (the other day she shaved off her eyebrow) and will go, "NO.HURTS!" When really it doesn't.

Sometimes it does but still.

So I could relate to this story tremendously. You definitely stayed in character for his age and I appreciated that a lot because there's many people that can't write kids. They have to come off very organic in order to be believable. Plus, I think we've all been there, we hurt ourselves and our parents are going to rub alcohol or put a band-aid and we start howling even if it doesn't really hurt.

I love how warm Ginny was in this. I could see her as that kind of attentive Mom and then when Harry ran in that was 100% believable to me. In my head he would be a little overbearing with his children and a little twitchy and jumpy because of everything that happened to him. I was a little embarrassed for him though but come on, at least he's a good dad!

Great story!

Author's Response: DEEDS!! I wanted to Squee when I saw this review! It has been entirely too long!! ♥ Thank you SO MUCH For stopping by to read and review this!

Awww, yay! I'm glad I had you smiling! :) Yes, children really are overdramatic, I was really trying my best to channel my little sister when she was small. :P I'm glad you found that to be realistic and in-character!

Awww, thank you SO much for the amazing compliments!! ♥ I'm so happy that this didn't seem organic!

Yes, I think Ginny would be a very attentive Mom too - especially considering how much she's seen HER Mom do just that! And yes, I really think Harry would be a little jumpy, too, but still an excellent father!

Again, thank you SO MUCH for this amazing review!

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