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Review:TreacleTart says:
Hi there!

I know this is getting redundant, but I'm here for House Cup 2015 - Gryffindor!

I'll admit that I was a bit caught off guard by this chapter. For some reason, I wasn't expecting this to be the end. I was thinking this was more like a middle chapter and you still had more to write, but then I started reading and you talked about a year later and Victoire's blessing and it just all felt so final.

I liked that you portrayed Victoire as a good person. I think often times she gets shown as airheaded or aloof or snotty, so it's nice to see this compassionate, understanding who gave her cousin the blessing to date her long time love. Whether she can tell that Teddy is happier or not, it takes a really big person to make a decision like that.

I will say that I found this chapter to be a bit rushed. All of the other chapters move at such a leisurely pace and then suddenly this one sort of summarizes the result of a ton of different important events. My personal thought is that adding a few more chapters in between to show some of these monumental events instead of just summarizing them here would improve this.

Still, as a whole I really like this story and the way you told it. Great work!

~Kaitlin

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