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Review:TreacleTart says:
Hello again!

Back for more! House Cup 2015- Gryffindor!

Oh, so it was Teddy and Victoire's engagement party. I somehow missed that in the first chapter. Well, that certainly makes things interesting. Teddy dumped Victoire for her cousin Rose. Yikes.

As in the last chapter, Rose's very calculated assessment of everything is brilliant. She's very clinical in how she describes everything as messed up and then explains why it's messed up. You've got the voice down just right.

The fact that Teddy and Rose both seem to share the same sort of personality was a cool choice. Usually, I see Teddy portrayed as the uber nice, sweet boy who does everything right, so I enjoyed how your interpretation broke from the normal. It makes him seem so much more human because he has flaws.

At the moment, I'm not quite sure why, but I have this feeling that this is going to end badly for the two of them. (Maybe cause everything else I've read of yours has a dark twinge to it) I'm a bit nervous about reading the next chapters and finding out what that is.

Good work!

~Kaitlin

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