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Review:Michael says:
Solid chapter all round. The ending was pretty well done; I love the way Ginny told Harry about the names. It seemed really natural to me.

Not exactly a criticism here but possibly something to consider: you're good with the romantic writing and we definitely see that between the couples all the time. Maybe make it a point to include scenes that are entirely non-romantic. You don't have to do this all the time, just enough to get the point across that Harry and Ginny are two separate people and not some romantic, mushy blob-couple (to exaggerate). I'm not saying the romantic interactions are bad or should be avoided, just also include some casual conversations too please!

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked the chapter and especially the ending, and thank you for the great tip regarding the romantic relationships. I think that's so true especially in Harry and Ginny's case, because they're both very independent. Thank you again both for your kind comments and for the advice, I appreciate it so much xx

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