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Review:Michael says:
Hey, this is Michael again. Not sure if you remember my lengthy review from before but I'm back again! I had been pretty bogged down with work for a while and you know how it goes: I kind of lost my motivation to keep reading even after my schedule cleared up. But recently I just rewatched all of the HP movies and the ending to the seventh part two was terribly dissatisfying. So naturally I've ended up here again; picking up right where I left off! As always I love your style. Something about much of what you write seems so cozy, and I think it's in the choice of detail. But if I may nitpick I'm tempted to say that the small subplot with Teddy being upset about the pregnancy seems to be resolved a little too quickly: children don't always get over dramatic moments like this because very little has affected their lives so seriously before. This kind of makes it lose a little bit of realism, but the idea was incredible nonetheless. As I said, I came into this chapter expecting a "feel-good" (not meant to be a derogatory term in this case; your writing makes me feel good!) story for some comfort. Including this little twist with Teddy seriously put some life and credibility into story for me because it was so unexpected, even if not perfectly executed. This chapter was enchanting to say the least, so thank you for your amazing dedication to a fantastic piece!

Author's Response: Hi there! I definitely remember, you were so helpful with your previous reviews!! I feel you, I definitely know the feeling of having that much on your plate and no inspiration to do anything else. It's really great to hear from you again, though. :)

First off, thank you so much for your kind words about my writing style. I truly enjoy making up those little details and it makes me so happy that you like reading them. Thank you!!! As for Teddy's reaction, I totally understand your point and it's something I'll consider. I have seen children react in different ways to news like that - my cousin's son wasn't too excited about the prospect of having a baby sister, but got over it within minutes. Of course, every child is different and I understand your point about making it more realistic and perhaps less fluffy. It's something I will bear in mind when I go back to edit this chapter. I'm so glad you liked the idea of having him be a little reluctant, though. I thought it would make sense for him to worry, because this baby is going to be Harry and Ginny's real son, while he is "only" their godson. I'm so glad you liked the chapter and again, thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts and tips so much, probably more than you know, so thank you as well for taking the time to write them down xxx

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