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Review:kenpo says:
Ravenclaw, House Cup 2015

I’m glad I’m getting this chance to read some of your stuff! I always enjoy it a lot, so I’m happy about this :D

I love the line about how he hasn’t lost his lanky figure to adulthood. I know a guy in his mid-thirties who still has those awkward, lanky legs of a much younger guy. Your words perfectly described what I’ve been trying to get together in my head.

The months passed, unforgiving and tortuous, as time tends to be.
That line is fantastic! And so true sometimes…

AHHH That was marvelous. Really, just... marvelous. Ah and I love this Louis, and Lysander. Especially Louis. This story might've started a little bit of a love for Louis in me, as well… There was so much I really loved about this. I keep saying that, but AHHH SO TRUE. The way that you wrote might be the best part. I had to keep stopping myself from literally just copying every other line and saying “Oh man this line is great”.

Another thing I thought worked really well was the way you incorporated the poem into it. I didn’t think that it would have a happy ending, because of the way that you used the lines. Once I got to the last end, though, it really tied the entire thing together really well.

You also do a great job adding to diversity on the forums without that seeming like the point. Sometimes when I read fics that don’t feature heterosexual characters, it sort of seems like the author sat down and said “Okay I want to write a story about a male/male ship”, and the story and characters come later.

This story really was just fantastic! Great job!


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