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Review:kenpo says:
Ravenclaw, House Cup 2015

Iím glad Iím getting this chance to read some of your stuff! I always enjoy it a lot, so Iím happy about this :D

I love the line about how he hasnít lost his lanky figure to adulthood. I know a guy in his mid-thirties who still has those awkward, lanky legs of a much younger guy. Your words perfectly described what Iíve been trying to get together in my head.

The months passed, unforgiving and tortuous, as time tends to be.
That line is fantastic! And so true sometimesÖ

AHHH That was marvelous. Really, just... marvelous. Ah and I love this Louis, and Lysander. Especially Louis. This story might've started a little bit of a love for Louis in me, as wellÖ There was so much I really loved about this. I keep saying that, but AHHH SO TRUE. The way that you wrote might be the best part. I had to keep stopping myself from literally just copying every other line and saying ďOh man this line is greatĒ.

Another thing I thought worked really well was the way you incorporated the poem into it. I didnít think that it would have a happy ending, because of the way that you used the lines. Once I got to the last end, though, it really tied the entire thing together really well.

You also do a great job adding to diversity on the forums without that seeming like the point. Sometimes when I read fics that donít feature heterosexual characters, it sort of seems like the author sat down and said ďOkay I want to write a story about a male/male shipĒ, and the story and characters come later.

This story really was just fantastic! Great job!


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