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Review:HermyLuna2 says:
Hi, I'm here for the House cup, from Hufflepuff.

HAHAHAHA!! The first line was really funny and captivating. Oh Bellatrix! Your take on her is fantastic and definitely in character in my opinion. I think it was very in character for Narcissa to pretend to not be listening to her psycho sister while playing with a doll she has given an actual name. That was sweet.
I like how you describe Lucius through Narcissa's eyes. She almost makes us believe that he's a Prince Charming here. Almost. I like the mention of Bellatrix's affair with Dolohov. A suggestion: I think that the sentence But with Lucius standing before her, there was only one answer... is unneccessary, it would be stronger without it, but that's my opinion. I really like the sentence It was just Lucius, moments before there would be no more of him. .
I wonder why you chose to make Narcissa discover the evil of Voldemort this late? I guess naivity sort of fits with her personality,but this much? Or is it only now that her eyes opened because it suddenly hits closer to home? is she being hypocritical?
I like the way you wrote this, the events you chose and distilled, Narcissa's motherhood and also her relationship being the red thread. Well done! I love your writing style!

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