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Review:Dojh167 says:
Hufflepuff House Cup 2015 Review

I love that you chose to elaborate on that HBP line by Hermione! I think it's a fun little gem, and it's definitely interesting that you chose to expand from using it as an indication of her neuroses to her feelings for Ron.

I like the "it builds character" line, haha! It's good that you put in a reference to Fred and George being able to do it with magic, but it still seems strange to me that the Weasleys would have a lawnmower in the first place. It seems like such a muggle artifact, and even if the Weasleys had one (which I'm sure Arthur would love to), I don't know they would even know how to work it or what it was for.

I LOVE the way you described how Hermione's brain, heart and hormones were all thinking different things. And that the hormones never thought in full sentences - perfect!

I would have liked to see a reference to Hermione actually smelling the grass, to more directly connect it to the smell of the potion.

I really enjoyed this!


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