Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Dojh167 says:
Hufflepuff House Cup 2015 Review

Hehe, I love how the humor established your MC's voice and personality right away, which is very effective in a story where you're not supposed to include background information.

From the dinner rolls reference I could immediately tell that we were talking about Petunia here. I think that you did a great job of capturing her in a three dimensional way. I could really see her anxiety, and because I had compassion for her as a mother, her fears made me sympathetic.

The passage about her wanting to dive into his veins with dish soap was amazing, because it captured the humor, the Petunia-ness, and the fear really really well. One of those moments that brings together having sympathy for her as a mother and feeling sorry for her for being so closed minded.

This story really leave me wanting to know more. I want to see what happens next and, more than that, I simply want t see more of this version of Petunia!

Sam.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed this story! I definitely enjoyed writing it. It's so good to hear that you sympathize with Petunia; I really wanted the reader to be able to feel for her, maybe juggling that with other perceptions of her. I'm not Petunia's biggest fan, but I understand that she's still a complex character, and I tried to add a layer to my image of her in this story. It's great that you like this version too!

I think this is the last of the reviews you left for me, so just let me say that I truly appreciate it. It was so nice to log in and find all these thoughtful reviews (especially when you were racing to the finish line) and it certainly made my day. Thank you!!!


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 583
Submit Report: