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Review:bittersweetflames says:
I didn't say this in my first review (because I had so many other things to say. lol) but I absolutely LOVE the way you have Molly dress (and fix her hair, obviously). She's just so cool and she obviously doesn't care what other people think of her. I mean, she's fit, she's fab and she's definitely no wallflower. You just manage to endear her to us without her being a sweet, overly saccharine type. I love that. Okay, so I love that we start off with a scene with Roxanne. In this scene all the questions we had from last chapter was answered: Why would she go for the Portrees and leave the Harpies? Will she take that risk? Is she the type who likes challenges instead of the safe? And, of course, these are all things Roxanne basically asks her. Of course, I have no idea who Hilarion is and how he and Lucy got together but it doesn't matter because you got the point across... They're conversation is just so natural that you can see these two cousins really do love and care for each other very much. And, haha, I love that Molly is basically an obsessive compulsive organiser. I feel that. SO HARD.
Okay, so Fitz is really interesting to me. Since he's an OC we don't even have a background to work with (unlike Molly, who's father and extended family we know) so I love the way you're developing him. And then there's Jinks. Goodie, he's hilarious. I love that he'd still be asleep one HOUR after he was supposed to report to practice. I don't know how he could handle that..I get twitchy even when I'm just a minute late.
And finally.. CONFLICT! Hahahaha... Fitz is basically CLUELESS at the whole coaching gig and you can just see that Molly is itching to help him (and, yes, Micromanage) but I guess they've both gotta learn how things go. I can't wait to see it! Brilliant. I don't need to say it twice.


Carla
House Cup 2015 Amazing Race Part 2, Ravenclaw

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