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Review:TreacleTart says:
Hey there!

I'm here for House Cup 2015- Amazing Race Round 2 - Gryffindor!

This was a lovely look at the relationship between fathers and sons and how it affects growth and development. I could clearly feel how badly Draco wanted to be like Lucius in every way. You've done a good job of highlighting that with the actions he took. Even his group of friends was a mirror image of his father's group of friends.

It was refreshing to see Scorpius rebel against that. He seems to have gotten more of his mother's qualities than his father's. I like that he befriends anyone regardless of parentage or house. I like that he's interested in muggle technology and that he wants to go into medicine. No child is a carbon copy of their parent, so it's nice to see Scorpius be his own man.

My only bit of constructive criticism for this is that the formatting is a bit strange. You have massive gaps between each paragraph and it makes this a bit more difficult to read. I think if you get a chance, going through and deleting some of that would help.

Otherwise, good job!

~Kaitlin

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