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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi there! Here to review this for my challenge and wow your banner is pretty! ♥

I just have to say quickly I read this whilst listening to the Last Goodbye and I agree, it is a truly beautiful song and really added to this story! Plus, I thought the lyrics were fitted in really nicely and gave the story a nice touch.

Anyhow, on with the story, I really liked the first section with Harry walking reflectively around the grounds of Hogwarts as it was just so powerful and you managed to emphasise both his thoughts and the landscape equally which was really great. You never really think about the emotionally and psychological impact it had on Harry as you just imagine him to be happy after it ended so I liked how you looked into in more depth.

All of the memories of the others were so sweet ♥ There were a few which stood out to me and one of those was Fredís in how he called him a brother in all but blood which was just so true and so powerful, it made me want to tear up a little. Then with Remus too and how Harry thought of him as a father. It was just so sad Remus had to go like that as I think he and Tonks would have adopted him into their family if they had stayed alive.

With James and Lily my heart broke a little :( Just poor, poor Harry thinking he caused all of them to die when really they chose to and were proud to die for him and were never forced to. I think he was right at the end in that he never will be able to say goodbye because I think that sort of guilt will stay with him forever, but hopefully it will fade away a little with the help of Ginny.

Great story!


Author's Response: Kiana!

I know! That banner is definitely one of my favorites! ;)

Wow, you listened to the song while reading?? Awesome! I tried really hard to make the flow of the story match up with the song, and hopefully it worked out okay.

The memories of everyone was easily the hardest part of writing this whole story. It was so difficult to pick and choose which characters I wanted to include and how to write them, and I'm so glad you liked it!

Fred is definitely my favorite of them all - but I'm a bit biased.

Thanks for reviewing Kiana! I really appreciate it!

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