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Review:Katie Wallenby says:
Even after so long this one was a difficult read for me. It's hard not to think about what might have been when you wind up alone after being forced to leave love behind in the middle of the night. But Lily was always a good girl and kind on top of it all. With everything that happened, I find I can't begrudge them the happiness they found. That was never my way anyhow.

Knowing them both like I do though, I have to compliment your characterization. The James you wrote is the James I know, confident yes, but ultimately caring and incredibly loyal despite his pranks and sharp wit. And Lily was simpler when it came to appearance than other girls, not really reveling in feminine finery with much frequency. We were alike in that way.

The one thing that did surprise me was that James and Sirius were invited to a Slug Club event, but in the end it's just a detail in a story that's about so much more than the setting.

Thanks for sharing this! I may have to read more like this I think. Maybe it will help give me closure.

Author's Response: Hi Katie.

I'm glad you like the characterization. I felt like Slughorn would be likely to send invitations to Sirius and James just because they're such characters, but I can definitely see how they'd not be invited with their shenanigans.

Thanks for yet another review! =)

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