Our website is made possible by displaying online advertisements to our visitors.
Please consider supporting us by disabling your ad blocker.





Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:The Summer Snake says:
Greetings from The Summer Snake! I have recently slithered out of hibernation and discovered this amazing place with such amazing stories, so I want to read and review as many as I can before I go back into hibernation!

This was a very cute little piece that I enjoyed. Your characterisation of Ginny is very good and little James is amusing. I like how you've shown the Muggle equivalent of band-aid/cleaning the wound here with James being afraid and crying even though it didn't hurt. It is a realistic portrayal of a kid.

Harry's sudden entry made sense too. He is bound to be jumpy after everything that has happened. The way Ginny described it as a saviour thing was very cute. It made me smile - you know if I could smile, being a reptile and all.

Over all, this was a great piece. Good descriptions, nice plot and cute dialogue. I am glad to have slithered by!

*showers confetti and flowers* Have a nice summer!

Now I'll be off to explore more of this wonderful sun! See ya!

With love,
The Summer Snake

Author's Response: Hi there little Summer Snake! Thank you for slithering on by my Author's page to leave me this amazing review! ♥

Thank you so much for your comments about the characterization and realistic portrayal of the child! I'm so flattered! :D

Yes, I definitely think Harry would be jumpy after everything that happened, and I'm happy I put an almost-smile on your face!

Thank you SO much for your amazing compliments and the confetti and flowers, and again for this amazing review! THANK YOU!


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 264
Submit Report: