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Review:LastMinuteLuna says:
Hello! Hello!

I'm LastMinuteLuna and I'm dropping by to leave you a review for the Pass It Along Challenge! I know. I know. It's awfully close to the deadline. I am cutting it quite close, but they don't call me LastMinuteLuna for nothing!

But enough about me. Let's talk about your fabulous story!

Lysander and Louis? I can't say that I've ever read this pairing before, but I'm a big sucker for unusual pairings, so this seemed to be right up my alley. I'm curious to see how they work together.

The way you played with emotion in this was quite beautiful. There's a sort of detached, hollow tone throughout it, like someone sort of reciting facts, but it also holds quite a bit of melancholy. Even at the end when Lysander agrees to date Louis, it never truly seems happy to me. Maybe it's because tragedy and death is what brings them together.

I love that Louis is stubborn and continues to pursue the man that he loves. Sometimes when you know it's right, you just have to work through all of the issues to get where you want to be. Louis seems to realize that and is patient, allowing Lysander to get to the right place before pushing him into a relationship.

The technical aspect of your writing is lovely in this. It's very polished and smooth and it flows in such an easy way. It was very nicely done.

Uh oh! Times up. I have to run. I've got a few more reviews to leave and the deadline is approaching! Thanks for such a melancholy story!

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