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Review:Lara says:
I actually squealed when I saw you updated! I should really be revising for my exams, but I don't even care.
The whole statue thing was even more mortifying then the 'naked' thing...I'm not sure which one made me cringe more!
I really liked the interaction between James and Seth, and Fred and Seth, too. It was rather sweet.
I KNEW it was going to be Vala straight away. She loves Seth, she's just too scared to admit it.
So, I loved James and Seth in this chapter, but is there going to be a little more than flirting in the next chapter (HINT, HINT)? You don't even understand how much I want to read Seth's awkwardness when she and James kiss for the first time.
When's Slughorn's Christmas party? And Christmas break? I'm looking forward to seeing the Woodley's interactions again. I think Seth's grandpa has something to do with something, if I've read this story right and picked up on the subtle hints properly...
Hope you update soon, but I totally understand the Uni sucks.

Author's Response: Lara, I squealed when I saw your lovely long review :) :) :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter! I also think that the statue scene is even more mortifying... I probably would have melted into the ground..haha.

I actually put a lot of time and thought into the Freddie-James-Seth conversation so I'm glad you liked it - for some reason, it was really hard to get it right. And YES VALA... I love writing her and I'm so glad readers seem to like her too. :).

Ahhh, the romance bit...haha. I know, I've been stretching it, making them dance around each other - I really want to make this seem realistic - Seth and James are very different and it takes time for them to actually realise that they might be good together...I guess I've just read too many fanfics with this hate/love theme (which is a cliche I obviously love) where everything happens much too fast for my taste and they go from "I hate your guts" to "lets snog in the broom cupboard" within paragraphs. It just doesn't seem natural. BUT I promise that something dramatic in the romance department is going to happen soon... I don't want to give away too much but I can promise you a majorly awkward moment ;)

Slughorn's Christmas Party is around December 20 (so probably the chapter after next) and shortly after that, Seth will go home for a very Woodley Christmas and New Year's... AND YES you're reading the story correctly, grandpa Woodley will reveal a family secret that will change how Seth sees him (I'm actually rubbing my hands right now like an evil master-mind).

Thank you so so much for this wonderful review, it really made my day so much better :). I can't say it enough how much such lovely feedback actually means to me :) I'll try to be quick with updating!

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