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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

This is Gabbie from the forums with our swap, I don't think either of us had the time to really get these done. Sorry that it took a minute, I would have been here sooner if it hadn't been for lame real life issues...

Anyway, Snape! I LOVE reading stories about him, I think he's such a complex character and it's always great to get new takes on him. This was a really sad one-shot though, I don't think many people would have been able to write about such a sad moment in his life like this. I certainly wouldn't have been able to but you've written this so beautifully.

There's a touch of bitterness in his narrative too that I like as well. Snape loved Lily and his reflections of her are so tender that when he thinks about what the world will remember her by, I can't help but agree. No one will really KNOW Lily or James for the people they had been and it made me think that the small things in a person's life mean the most. There was so much heart to his memories of her that it nearly broke mine, I thought you wrote this so wonderfully.

We don't really see this side to Snape but I enjoyed delving into his mind. The love that he had for Lily may have been one-sided but being cared and understood by someone reached a part of him that no one would be able to grasp. That would be their secret, I suppose. The ending of this of course had me tearing up though and it was a great way to close off this one-shot, I'm really impressed. :)

Thanks for the swap!

Much love,

Gabbie

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