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Review:xinkheartedx says:
Hi there!

It's MyChemicalFanFiction (from the forums) here, I just dropped by from the forums to check out your authors page and I saw this.

I really enjoyed reading this, I love reading stories from Severus' POV and this was so well written!

You are AMAZING at describing things, I could picture everything you mentioned and imagined the whole scene playing out. In particular, 'The block of ice growing around his heart' gave me the chills.

I also thought that Severus going to the special place he had with Lily was really sweet and touching.

All in all, this was a really awesome little one-shot.

- Ali

Author's Response: Thanks Ali, I'm really glad you liked it!

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