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Review:The Lady of Love says:
First off, I have to say how well researched this story is. You have put a lot of thought into it and that shows. I really admire your writing skills and your creativity here.

The game of Creaothceann is very amusing and funny and I'm wondering how you came up with it. Sounds like fun, haha. I also liked how you subtly introduced the whole Baron-Helena quotient here. Little details like these really make the story so enjoyable for me.

Things were sailing pretty smoothly in this chapter and I liked that. You captured the normalcy of life quite well here and there was a realistic touch. The descriptions were, as usual, very good and I am enjoying the narrative. This is a great story and I can't wait to read more!


Author's Response: Thank you! I actually loved doing all the research as I think history is so fascinating, especially this time period, and it was really cool to learn more about it as I didn't know that much about it before I started writing this fic. And wow, you're making me blush :p Thank you so much, it really means a lot to me that you like my writing style and creativity. I'm flattered.

Creaothceann is not actually my own invention, it's from the brilliant JKR's Quidditch Through the Ages. I thought it sounded hilarious and the time period fit so I wrote it into the story! I'm glad you like the introduction of the Baron and Helena in here. I'm a details person too (in writing anyway) and I'm so glad you enjoyed their appearance here. As you know, they do get more time to shine later on.

That was exactly the purpose of this chapter, to show everything running smoothly the way they intended, essentially their dream come to fruition before everything inevitably goes downhill in the end. So glad you are enjoying it!!

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