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Review:The Lady of Love says:
Don't you say this chapter wasn't exciting! It was in fact very, very exciting! I loved how you wrote the building process of the Hogwarts castle. Your descriptions were marvellous and I could really visualise it all. The idea that so many groups, from giants to house-elves, came together to build the school is indeed very creative and heartwarming. That is officially my head canon now too xD

What I loved about this chapter was the simplicity in Helga's thoughts. She is so dedicated, so thorough and so thoughtful - you've characterised her wonderfully. I liked how the four founders were working together here towards the school and how Helga played her part in the process.

The concept of them having a little struggle and little things still requiring some figuring out is quite realistic and it's good you showed that here. I am also enjoying the small details slipped into the narrative and discovering more of the founders' personalities as each chapter passes by.

Great job over all. I am really liking the story. Lots of love for you!

Author's Response: Haha, I should probably remove that A/N as I really didn't anticipate how many people would find the construction process exciting :p I think this was one of my favorite chapters overall to write though, because I really got to go back to the source of all these quirks that Hogwarts has and come up with the story behind it all. I think that Helga, as the person who was known for accepting basically anyone into her Hogwarts house, would probably know people from all walks of life and encouraged cooperation of all types of people (and house elves and giants) to build the castle. Aw! I'm flattered that this has become your headcanon!!

I'm so glad you like Helga's POV here. I think Hufflepuff is easily the most overlooked house and I wanted to give Hufflepuff qualities a chance to shine here, where I think she would have been really important.

I'm glad you appreciated their struggle in figuring out how to make it all go smoothly. For a project that big and groundbreaking, I couldn't imagine it all going by without any issues, so I'm glad this felt real to you.

Thanks for anoher fantastic review!! ♥

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