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Review:The Lady of Love says:
Another awesome chapter! I loved how you've used different point of views in different chapters. I loved getting an insight into the events from Godric's thoughts here!

It was interesting how you cultivated the idea of bringing about Hogwarts here. The concept of Muggles and Wizards living together in peace but then turning on each other due to the war is very believable - and I think true to canon to some extent. You've done a brilliant job of portraying the scenario.

I am honestly hooked to the story - your descriptions are, you have a very interesting plot and I'm very eager to read on how the story shapes up. Definitely moving on to the next chapter(s)! I am glad I got to be your Secret Spring Santa and picked this story to read.


Author's Response: Thank you! This story was my first attempt at rotating POV's (and actually my first try at third person perspective, as well!)

It's really good to hear that the way the idea of Hogwarts came about seemed natural. As this was centuries before the Statute of Secrecy, I didn't think magical folk would be so removed from Muggle society yet, but foreign invaders would be a likely impetus to start driving them apart.

Wah, thank you! I'm so, so glad you are enjoying this and that you're invested in how things turn out! I'm really happy you're my Secret Spring Santa too. :) Thanks so much for your review. ♥

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