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Review:The Summer Snake says:
Greetings from The Summer Snake! I have recently slithered out of hibernation and discovered this amazing place with such amazing stories, so I want to read and review as many as I can before I go back into hibernation!

Wow, this was a very nice little story! I loved that you took the idea of JKR giving Dursley a magical child and put your own spin to it. Now, I'm a magical snake so I understand all the fear that non-magical creatures face - and I guess it's similar with humans - and so I think you tackled Rachel's reactions very well.

Your characterisation of Harry, Lily, Dudley and little Hazel was all perfect. I really enjoyed reading their interactions. The way you described everything was very good too, especially how Harry patiently explained all the wizarding world stuff to Rachel. Dudley's worry about stuff like Voldemort's time was also genuine and a nice touch. The excitement of the girls was very good too.

All in all, I think you had a brilliant plot here and some great scenes. Your characterisation, flow and descriptions were superb. I really enjoyed reading this and it brought a smile to my face (yes I'm a creature but I can smile because I'm magical). Great job writing this! *showers confetti and flowers*

Now I'm off to explore more of this wonderful sun! See ya!

With love,
The Summer Snake

Author's Response: Hello Summer Snake! I'm glad to see you slithering (Slytherin? :P) in to read one of my stories.

I'm glad you liked the idea. Like I said, I claimed it as my head-canon as soon as I heard it and now that I'm [not as] scared to write Next Gen I just had to give it a try!

Thank you for the confetti, flowers, and kind words. =)

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