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Review:merlins beard says:
Hi again!
I don't know why you're not happy with this chapter, I think it's great!

Everyone needs something to make all that's happening easier on them...
Astoria and Sam are so sweet together, I love all the awkwardness between them! And I'm glad Daphne notices what's going on and can actually laugh about that, too. It is her I fear for the most. She could be going crazy because of all the pain she's enduring all the time.
Draco trying to find her is going to be interesting. I love how you portrayed him (because I just can't - no WON'T- accept that he can ever be the bad guy in a story. He just does what he's told. That's stupid, of course, but he really doesn't have much choice in the matter.)

I love that you put in the part with Draco and Bellatrix. It gave me a link to the timeline of other events... now we know Harry is at Shell Cottage, and the final battle isn't far off anymore. I wonder if Draco will run away too, when he finds Daphne.

I can't wait for more! This has been awesome, as always!


Author's Response: Thanks as always for your wonderfully kind words Anja!!

I worked hard on making the interactions between Sam and Astoria delightfully awkward. I think it's easy to forget how old they are, so I tried to use this chapter to remind you of that. They're super awkward around each other because that's what 15-year-old kids are like.

The bit with Draco and Bellatrix was almost all for timeline establishment. But of course, I also absolutely adore Draco. I'm almost sad that he wasn't introduced into my story until this far along, but it had to be done. I have all sorts of headcanons about him that I may write about though. And the Battle of Hogwarts isn't far off, so the end of this story isn't far off. I hope you like what's coming next. It's about to get quite exciting I think!!

Thanks again for the review!!

Much love,

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