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Review:Lobelia Sackville-Baggins says:
I love how free Harry is in this story to be outgoing and, well, carefree. You almost never see him being silly in the books (except for his ever-present, glorious sass), but he really has his life under control here, and it shows. Excellent job portraying grown-up Harry.
I love how you're showing the children of the death eaters as real people. We rarely get to see that side of things. It isn't their fault that they were raised to hate muggles, and most of them (like Malfoy) figure it out by the time they become adults. Poor Nott -- and thank you to Malfoy for taking care of his friend. Ron seems to be doing better in keeping things professional -- I think he's grown up a lot as well. He's still impulsive, but he thinks a little more before he speaks, now.
And YAY for kicking babies! ACK, NO! That sounded like I approve of people kicking children. NO. But the first kicks are always such a magical moment (and an "oh crap") moment.
Can't wait ti see the next chapter! Good luck with your busy life!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like grown-up Harry. I do agree he could never be silly and carefree in the books because he always had that extremely heavy burden on his shoulder but he's free of that now. (Glorious is the exact right word to describe his sass by the way. BEST part of the books!!!)

I'm so glad to hear you liked this new take on the Death Eaters. It definitely isn't their fault that they were born into that world, especially for those who were as young as Malfoy and Nott. I definitely agree that Ron is much more mature in dealing with Malfoy this time around.

Haha, yeah, let's not kick any babies, eh? Lol! But yes to babies kicking in the womb ;) Haha, that cracked me up. It really is magical, and, like you said, scary as.

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on the chapter, I appreciate it so much! Thank you as well for your well wishes - hope you're doing well too, whatever you're up to :) and thank you (again) for reading and reviewing. It means so muh to me xxx


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