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Review:The Summer Snake says:
Greetings from The Summer Snake! I have recently slithered out of hibernation and discovered this amazing place with such amazing stories, so I want to read and review as many as I can before I go back into hibernation!

My my, you broke my snake-y cold heart here. I'd think I couldn't feel much being so cold-blooded but this story gave me all the feels. You did wonderful for the angst galore challenge as this was indeed full of angst.

Your characterisation of Harry was perfect. I loved the conflicting emotions he faced and the pain he felt. You really brought that to the surface. The descriptions were raw, vivid and very moving. The bit when he addressed everyone from Dumbledore to his parents was the best and almost made me cry.

I honestly am kinda speechless right now. You, my dear, have made this snake cry and shed its skin - because you know I'm a magical snake who sheds its skin when its very sad. I had come to spread some summer cheer here but oh dear this was so beautifully tragic, I can only halfheartedly do it - *showers confetti and flowers*

All in all, an amazing piece of writing. You conveyed a lot in a few words and I really, really am glad I read it. Amazing flow, wonderful writing and powerful plot. Great job!

I'd just love to continue singing more praises of this awesome one-shot but time is ticking so I must be off to explore more of this wonderful sun! See ya!

With love,
The Summer Snake

Author's Response: Well hello Summer Snake!! So very nice to meet you!!

I'm so glad you stopped by and became the FIRST to review this story! That's awesome! Thank you!

Harry is one of those characters that I actually am terrified of writing, so I'm glad that you like my characterization of him!! I was totally afraid I'd mess it up.

Thanks so much for your confetti, flowers, and praises!! It makes me SO happy! And THANK YOU again for reviewing! I really appreciate it!
LL


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