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Review:Lara says:
Amazing, as always! Someone stealing Seth's clothes was mortifying, but it was all good once James turned up-I could actually read properly then instead of behind my hands!
So many things I want to squeal about in this chapter-
1; Slughorn's party and the fact that Harry Potter's going to be there-that had to be mentioned for a reason, right?
2; who the bloody hell is the person that stole her clothes and stuff? It was that Notte girl, wasn't it? It had to be one of Vala's friends, at least.
3; I love the budding friendship with Sam! The fact that Seth forgave him so easily just makes me like her more.
5; That wave was adorkable...and now I feel weird for saying that.
In regards to my previous review, do you mean, like, twenty or so chapters over all or twenty chapters MORE? 'Cause we're on chapter 17 now, so is there only a few more left?
Thanks for the update! Totally understand the Uni thing-I'm in Uni too and the work load is unbelievable!
Little question before I stop blabbering on, is there a kiss in the near future I can look forward to, and if not, a little hint we can have? ;)

Author's Response: Haha, I also cover my face when I read something mortifying! I'm so glad I'm not the only one :)

So, first of all, thank you thank you thank you for your lovely long review... I literally squealed when I saw it this morning (in a very grown-up, dignified sort of way, of course). So...
1. I just HAD to bring ole Sluggy in again - and his parties, after all, are legendary. And yes, Harry Potter was mentioned for a reason ;)
2. Ahhh the mystery... there is actually a couple of people who could have done it, but it does seem like somebody was really desperate to embarrass Seth
3. Me too!!! I think that Sam has gone through quite some character development and he deserves friends... his secret affair with a Quidditch player has been hard on him and he was starting to shut himself off.
4. Haha yeah and Seth HATES it :) James still doesn't get that her nickname is Seth... but he will soon ;)
5. It WAS though! Haha... I love dorky waves, they are the best.

I actually meant like 20 more chapters... I've got a couple of things planned (don't want to make it too easy for James, haha).

And urgh, Uni... I actually love Uni but all that homework (I thought I'd be done with that after school XD) and midterms and essays and papers...well, you know what it is like :)

I really don't want to give away too much but I can tell you that there will be a couple of kisses in the near future.. maybe not next chapter but the one after that... and some of them will be great and some rather awkward ;)

Thank you so much again for reading and taking the time to leave this awesome review. I can't tell you how much this means to me! Your lovely words are very much appreciated!!!

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