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Review:merlins beard says:
Sooo... Bellatrix is pure evil. (That's not even new... but still pretty horrible)

I'm really glad Astoria got away and that she insisted on taking the others with them. They'll probably turn out to be useful allies. Yet I have to agree with Daphne, returning for their parents won't do any good. they are probably dead already.

It's hard to read the parts where daphne is in so much emotional pain... all the feeling you bring across, it's the icy hand clutching my heart all over again, only this time it's even worse.

Only one more chapter for now. How am I going to live with the suspense of not knowing what's going to happen next?


Author's Response: Oh Bellatrix, she is honestly a horrifying person. I love writing her though and love her as the villain of this story, even though she makes kind of rare appearances.

With the escape, I figured it'd be a little boring if it was just Daphne and Astoria hiding out alone in the forest. So, I added another family in there. Plus, I wanted to kind of draw that contrast between the now broken Greengrass family and the Croft family.

About Linus and Norella, it killed me to kill them off. I loved them so much as parents and as characters. It's harder for me to write adults, because I feel like I am not yet an adult. It's especially hard for me to write about parents because I've never been one. But Norella and Linus seemed natural to me.

I'm so glad you had such a crazy emotional response to this chapter too. It didn't start out so heavy with Daphne's emotional trauma, but it turned out that way. It felt natural for it to take that turn because she's just been through so much.

Thanks for sticking with my story!

Much love,


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