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Review:anony says:
hi! I hope you don't mind criticism.at first your story seemed to progress real fast. i like the story but they are many parts missing. like in this one for example nothing was told about their year long engagement and the reason behind it. last ch draco made it clear that he can't stand watching the love of his life marrying someone else but now we see that he is at the wedding. if draco and blaise were such good friends how is that he is not one of the groomsmen? waht is the deal with his new girlfriend.
plz don't hate me for this but your story has so much potential. I guess a bit more elaboration will work wonders! update soon!!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your review. And first of all, I don't mind criticism, not at all, it really helps sometimes.
For your topics, yeah, I guess you're right, I could explain it a little more (guess it never came to mind, but if you're writing it yourself you don't notice that some parts are missing, because it's all in my head :D ). So thanks for the ideas, I'll try to bear it in mind and elaborate on a few points you've mentioned in the next chapter, or maybe add a few things in the older ones.
- schneeflocke


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