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Review:mpriya says:
Really liked the chapter..I love Ron's reactions..there were never much of what he was thinking in the books.

However, conjuring the cake..that might not be possible, food being one of the exceptions to elemental transfiguration. (Interestingly, I never found out the others) Minor point but I had to mention it. Great work!

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! I'm really enjoying exploring the inside of some other people's head in this story, not just Harry's. I'm glad to hear you like that too :)

You're right about the elemental transfiguration, of course, but I think the point was that you can't conjure food out of nothing? However, I think that if Andromeda actually has egg, butter, flour etc. in her cabinets, she could produce one with her wand? But maybe 'conjure' is the wrong word in that content. I'll definitely keep it in mind when I edit this chapter. Thank you so much for pointing it out, and for reading and reviewing xx

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