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Review:The Happy Lady says:

I am The Happy Lady. My friend over at the forums have seen you around there. She really wanted to come over and leave a review, but she cannot do so for safety reasons. You see, she is hiding from the King of Westeros, Joffrey I believe his name was. Coming here would reveal her location and secret name, so I decided to go in her stead. That is why I am here.

So to the story. I am going to be honest and say I do like happy stories more. I am The Happy Lady, after all, so I really am supposed to. But I think it was good, even if it was not the most happy story I have read, because you really captured these characters. I found them to be very believable. While I am not that familiar with this universe you are writing in, I do know a little thanks to my friend and her love of Harry Potter. And I thought your characterisation was very good, very true to the books but also adding new elements to their characters. So I really liked it, and I even got chills!

The chopped parts were interesting. I have seen it before, of course, but I have always been a little against that way of telling a story. I think it needs to be done well for it to work, and so far there have been few stories that have managed to do just that. But I really think you did it right, because this style of writing definitely worked here.

I wish I could stay a little longer, but I am afraid I have to go now. As The Happy Lady, it is my duty to spread happiness all around. And there are still much for me to do, so I cannot spend any more time here. But I hope you understood that I liked the story. I will probably not be back, but I am sure you will see my friend over at the forums. So if you ever want to reach me, tell her and she will overbring the message to me.

May you have a happy day!

Lots of Love

The Happy Lady

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