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Review:marissa lily potter says:
Hey there!

Let me apologize for how long it's taken me to get to reviewing your story. And boy, am I angry with myself for not having got to it sooner because that was one incredibly intriguing and amazing chapter! I adore Founder's stories. I think they're underrated and there aren't very many good ones out there. From what I've read so far, I don't think yours falls into that category at all! I really liked the way you stared the story off with that bit of prologue. It caught my attention right away. So many times have authors used lines from the Sorting Hat within Founder's stories, but rarely do they ever tie into the characters so soon!

Getting to see a younger Slytherin was interesting, I think. I never thought of him as the bookish type but I can definitely see it. I think the interaction between Slytherin and his mother was a bit... awkward. Maybe he's just a very silent fellow but it didn't seem like a mother-son talk. But maybe that was the point haha! But what I'm trying to say is that I do like Salazar's character! I think he's very intriguing and even though he hasn't done much yet, you can tell that he's observant! I can totally feel that there's a lot that he will be able to do.

The mentor-mentee relationship between Ingvar and Godric was amazing. I loved the way they interacted with one another! I think it's so unique of you to introduce Godric into Salazar's life by giving him a basis for a relationship with Salazar's father first. I can't say it's something I've ever seen before and I'm very intrigued by it! I love character relationships and I think you've done such a good job with building Ingvar and Godric's! I'm really looking forward to reading more about them!

I enjoyed this first chapter a lot. I see a lot of potential for it and you've set it up very nicely. I can tell that this is the calm before the story and I am looking forward to watching it unfold. Great work!

Cheers,

Marissa

Author's Response: Thank you, I feel so bad that I'm getting all this feedback, yet it's taking me ages to finish chapter three. I recently just started rewriting the entire thing, but I swear if I have to force myself with every fiber of my being to get it done, I'm not dropping off this story!

That said, I'm really happy you liked the first chapter, and it's mostly Salazar's character...he's a bit quite in the beginning. Gets a little more outspoken after Godric gets a hold of him.. I'm going to enjoy writing that. XD


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