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Review:happyanon says:
First off, i think I missed the chapter 14 update which sucks because its an interesting one so i read it duuuh! Hahaha okay okay im really excited at how James is reacting towards seth. Definitely. Like, first of all, he checked up on her when she was not back from the forest with the map. Im so happy!! Second, he is obv curious/interested in her. The guy who bumped into seth was his friend, he wanted Seth there. also Asher looked rumpled and stuff while he was in the forest? i dunno he could be a real dick and may have been with some girl and a heates snog or he's got this amazing secret storyline that we get to learn soon!! SURPRISE OF THE CHAPTERS award go to VALA AND GRANDFATHER. BECAUSE DAMN IT GRANDFATHER TOTALLY WINKED AND VALA IS ACTUALLY A NICE PERSON WHO DESERVES TO BE FREE AND HAPPY. Im super curious how will this progress as a story and as a whole. SETH has some very intsresting characters in her life. I'd like to see how she will transition as this girl who enjoyed her quiet life to being this girl who is slowly and unknowingly getting a turn in the spot light. Id like to see more interaction with seth and james, seth and sam, ded need the CHANG kid back in the mix. Also whats up albus? Omg i hate how you're describing his fashion it really is very pompous ugh. Katie is very lovely i adore her. Also im very excited on how you will pull it altogether like James and Seth and whatever they end up being, Seth and her family with the whole Being a Woodley shebang, the hopefully better relationship with Vala and grandfather and the story of Asher and why the heck is he being like thaaat? Also id love to see a freddie Seth ans that barbanas ink guy whose name ive forgotten something augustus cotton something. I really enjoyed it and i look forward to the next update. Xoxo much love!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm so glad to hear that you liked it (both chapter 14 and 15) :). I am also excited about James and Seth - finally they get to know each other a little, even though they keep bickering :) And yes, James might have been responsible for the party invitation ;)

Asher is a tricky character but I'll lift the secret in a couple of chapters. And yay for gramps Woodely and Vala - I'm really glad you liked how they turned out

As you can tell with Seth, she isn't yet aware that her life might change. She is smart and all that but simply lacks the life experience to actually notice that she is already changing (after all, she can talk to James and Sam, for instance, without being completely awkward).

And yes, Sam and Hector; this just had to happen eventually :)

Also, you're right, Albus looks horrible, haha. I'm glad someone noticed :)

THANK YOU SO MUCH again for taking the time to review - it really means a lot to me!

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