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Review:marissa lily potter says:
Hiya!

This was an interesting chapter. I liked the insight we got on Hermione and all that she's been doing since the end of the war. It definitely helps build her character better. We didn't get much of an appearance from Hermione in the last chapter so it was nice to see that this one was dedicated to her. I always liked Hermione and I thought that she would do big things when she graduated from Hogwarts.

While that is the case though, I don't know, something about her being an Auror didn't stick by me. I just didn't think that was the type of career she would go into. Not because she wouldn't be good at it because well, it's Hermione and I'm sure she would be able to do anything she put her mind to but I always thought of her as someone who fought for equality to make the world a better place to live. Maybe I just thought she would have bigger potential.

Still, I'm excited to see what you do with her as an Auror. Ah, her relationship with Ron kind of made me sad but I guess it is what it is. I'm quite nervous to see how that plays out now haha. I thought you did a very good job at portraying Hermione. She was composed, witty and thoughtful. Her characterization was spot on! I'm incredibly pleased about that.

Once again, this was a great chapter. It's nice to see that Hermione has such a high position in the Ministry because that seems like the type of things she would be able to accomplish very early on in her career. I was interested while reading this and although this chapter didn't have as much action as the last one, it was still fun and exciting! The flow was great again. It was a bit slow but I think that's because this chapter had a lot of background information. I don't blame you for that though and I'm actually very pleased that we got so much background information. It definitely makes picturing everything easier!

Great work!

~Marissa

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