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Review:Claire Evergreen says:
Hey! Here for the BvB Challenge!

I will say that I don't ever read Jily-centric fics, but I figured I'd try out one of yours and I'm really glad I did because it's so cute!

I'm so so so so so glad that you had them actually be friends before they got together. So many people have Lily hating James up until their seventh year and then suddenly having a change of heart and getting together, but that makes no sense. A+ for changing it up!

I do have extremely extensive headcanons for the Marauders, but I really like your characterization for all them, especially Sirius and James. Sirius did have that confident-borderline-arrogant personality, but he could also be (pardon the pun) serious enough to have an actual conversation with Lily. James, too, came across much more mature than I'm assuming he would have been in earlier years, which perfectly fits with what we know from canon. Both of them act like actual people who have matured from when they were younger.

Liv seems like a wonderful friend for Lily. It's really obvious that the two of them are very different, but not so much that it would seem strange that they were friends.

I just really like your characterization for everyone in this story, it was really well done! I'm so glad I got to read this! Great job!

-Claire

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The friends-before-dating thing seemed so obvious to me since we know nothing for a 15+ month span between OWLS & them starting to date and I figured their relationship would have to change over their 6th year.

I'm glad you liked the characterizations as well! Such sweet comments.

Thanks for the lovely review! =)


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