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Review:typewriter says:
Hello!

I really enjoyed this! I don't often, if ever, read James/Lily stories for some reason. I was intrigued by your premise, and I'm very happy I gave it a shot because it was a lot of fun. I liked the portrayal of a Slug Club meeting. My favorite description was: "It hadnít taken long to realize that he thought more was more." I got a good laugh over that, especially at how spot on it is. I loved James and Lily's dance, and how he was so honest with her. You could really tell he'd been waiting for so long to tell her honestly how he felt. I always assumed James was immature about how he went about wooing Lily, which is why she didn't like him for a very long time. I like that you gave him a moment to be raw and bare his heart to her. It was lovely. My only criticism would be that I was a little confused by Severus's part in the story. I felt that it was a bit unnecessary considering the fact she was already balancing her boyfriend and James, but in the long run it didn't take away anything from your writing and I enjoyed it all!

Amanda

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I really think that line sort of summarizes who Slughorn is as a person: bigger, louder, brighter, etc. I'm glad you like James's portrayal since I wanted to make sure he was not portrayed as a total pain. The main reason Snape was there was because I think Slughorn would choose him as a member of the club, because he is a) in Slughorn's house and b) a Potions genius. Thanks for the review Amanda! =)

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