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Review:SunshineDaisies says:
Cute! I like the end bit especially :) I'd have liked to see a bit more development, especially of the relationship between Lily and Edric. I think it would be a lot more impactful if we got to see the comparisons between how Lily is with him, and how she is with James. But that's kind of hard to do in a one-shot and especially in a song-fic. So maybe just something to keep in mind for next time!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You're right about struggles with development in these sorts of stories, but I definitely will keep your comments in mind for future stories though. =) I'm glad you thought it was cute.

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