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Review:RupertsPheonix says:
So I work at a university, and we've had terrible weather this week -- I just took this whole snow day to read your fanfiction. What a great story! I can see, over these 51 chapters, how you've grown as a writer and how you've established a continuation of these beloved characters. Excellent work!

The way you write about Harry and Teddy interacting is literally one of the most beautiful things I've ever read. It's perfect; exactly what I'd imagine Tonks and Remus wanting for their son.

I love how you handled Mrs. Granger's death. I cried over and over again as I read about Hermione learning of the cancer, then dealing with it, then getting married with her sick mother there, and then, the death scene. God, that death scene rattled me to my core and brought back all of my uncertainties when my Gram died, but also - it provided me a great opportunity for reflection, so thank you. You wrote with raw emotion, which was further reflected with Hermione's outburst to Harry at the Hogwarts Quidditch pitch - well handled.

I also deeply appreciate how you write George. I've been working on some George-centered stuff myself, but I don't feel like I can capture him and the balance between tragedy and every day joys as well as you can.

Okay, so is Ginny preggers with our little James the second? Just my guess!

Looking forward to the next chapter,
Kate/RP

Author's Response: Wow, I can't believe you read it all in one day, that's amazing. And I'm so, so happy to hear that you enjoyed it too. Thank you so much for all of those kind words.

I'm so happy you like my take on Harry and Teddy's relationship. For me, it's SO important, especially to Harry who knows what it's like growing up without that love.

Mrs Granger's death was one of the more difficult subjects. I know that a lot of people have gone through similar things (I lost my Granddad to cancer) and that's why it's really scary to write about. And that's why your words truly mean SO much to me. I can't thank you enough, it nearly made me tear up actually. Thank you so, so, so much.

I'm also thrilled to hear you like George in this story! I definitely enjoy writing him so it's just great to hear that you like reading it too.

Interesting guess about Ginny. I don't think she's in the baby stage just yet, though.

Honestly, this review has made me so happy, and I don't think I can thank you enough for it. Just know that it means so much to me that you read the story and took the time to write this. I appreciate it so much xx


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