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Review:marissa lily potter says:
Wow just wow. I never used to be a huge dark/horror fan but
there are some GREAT stories on this forum that are right in that
genre. I think it is quickly becoming one of my favourite genres
to read and you've done nothing but push me more in that
direction.

I had chills reading this fic. It was so good. I can see the desire
in Scorpius so perfectly. The way you described him was
amazing. His need to kill the redhead because of Rose was very
creepy but also so believable. I kept thinking to myself, this is
horrifying but this is so so SO good. I couldn't peel my eyes
away from the page while reading and I tried to go as fast as I
could because I just wanted to see where it would go haha.

I haven't read The Wild Rose but I am definitely going to
consider reading it now because this fic convinced me that it
has to be good. I love ScoRose. They are definitely my absolute
favourite pairing and you did them justice here. I always
imagined their relationship would always be strained and difficult
and have many challenges and this was such a good
interpretation of it. It definitely appealed to my headcanon :)

Hmm, I really do like the ending. I think you ended it perfectly.
The last three sentences especially:

She smiles.

I smirk.

Finally, you're mine.

Ooh so many feels there! What I do suggest to give it some
more fill though if that's what you want is perhaps add a little bit
more information to the parts leading up to those last three
sentences. Describe the setting some more, give us a reason for
why Scorpius is at the hotel, perhaps describe what Rose is
wearing. I feel like adding more details to the ending would not
only make the readers feel more a part of the story but it was
also give you more suspense. The last bit seemed super
suspenseful and I think that's what you were gong for but the
lead-up could have been better.

That being said, I think this was such a fantastic fic. I enjoyed
reading it from all aspects. You did a great job characterizing
Scorpius and even though we didn't get Rose's POV here nor
did we see her for very long, I felt like I knew her. I felt like I
knew how Scorpius was feeling and how she was towards him. I
am very happy to have been able to read this fic.

Thanks for writing it! Cheers.

~Marissa

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