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Review:FriendofMolly says:
marauder5,
You wrote a wonderful chapter. A particularly difficult chapter, but thoroughly perfect in the feeling you conveyed. I don't know if your spell check went on strike or that there was a hiccup in the processing at this site. I saw numerous misspells and possibly typos. Perhaps Luna's Wrackspurts got to it. Saying that it no way ruined the content. In fact the timing for Harry's partial meltdown was well done and came at a perfect interval. Yes all those who fought Riddle did so for the best of reasons, yet I understand why Harry felt at this time it was for nothing. Because the selfish actions of a crazy orphan were a waste of so many peoples lives. Many thought, if only Tom had turned his considerable powers to the good, how much better the Wizarding World would have been. And he lost after destroying so much, so other than destruction what was the use? Good for the voice of reason, otherwise known as Hermione showed up. Now I must continue.
FoM

Author's Response: Thank you! I am very happy to hear that you liked it. It was difficult to write as well so it's really great to hear that the emotions of it still came across. Thanks for telling me about typos - I'll go back and check for sure!! I'm glad you found Harry's little meltdown both believable and appropriate for the time. You're so right. There was really no point to Voldemort's action, so much to the action of those who stood up against him. I guess Harry got the two confused for a while there. As always, Hermione straightened a bit of that confusion up though.

Thanks for another lovely review, for sticking with the story and for making me smile. I appreciate it so much x


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